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Fuck the world

He just spins

And swirls

In a daze

As he gazes

At his blade

In his hand

On the floor

He Bleeds A little

As they giggle

He Just Cries

As He Slowly Dies.
©2005-2009 ~Syanisha
:iconsyanisha:

Author's Comments

Yeah this uhm sucks pretty bad :P first poem in like 4 yrs so a little bad but i donno i figured i would submit it plz tell me what u think thanks :)

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:iconinsanegenius-stock:
as i said its pretty neat!!!

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OM NOM NOMING
:iconmidnighteshadows666:
very good and emotional.

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I do believe that my insanity is sober with intoxicated drunkness.
:iconemotoaster:
I did a poem thing sorta like this called slicers last words.Has a picture of my wrist also.Great job.:)

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As of May 8,2006 I am officially ~corpse-in-my-bed's biggest fan.
If you wanna see some fanart,you'll click here.
Steal and die.
:iconbaybeekitty:
Very well done. Thank you for sharing it. :hug:
:iconphantomwords:
is the picture that accompanies it your own?

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